Other than the fact that YOU STOLE THOSE CHARACTER DESIGNS it was a good movie.
This one was better then all the others. You are improving. Grammer still needs some work. F BOMB heh heh heh funny.... the fan art was funny too!
Take more time making these. That way you can brush up on your spelling and grammer as well as fix some not so good animations.
Change the graphics. You can say its style but its not good.... at best its abstract art.
Work more on your storyline and character designs. They all seemed to slapped together and the storyline thus far has been highly repetitive, "He killed them all and no evidence was found of who killed them".
Don't give up
You have real talent in drawing and animation. But sadly I did not like this movie. The story was real real boring up untill the end, which was great. Next time in my opinion DO NOT use voice overs. It is a rare thing to get good voice overs here so I would suggest you stay away from them. I will look foreward to your next movie.
The squiggly lines give me a headache. Other than that good movie.
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